An increasing number of people choose to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance. Why do people have operations to change the way they look? Do you think this is positive or negative development?
A majority of individuals prefer to enhance their outlook by undergoing through several cosmetic surgeries. While it really depends on the situations leading people to this decision, the root causes lie in the lack of confidence and the purpose of medical treatment. In my opinionhaving cosmetic operations is a positive trend.
Rationally, when people hear of someone going through cosmetic surgery, the first thing they will think of is due to individual insecurity. Many people just do not have confidence in their natural appearance, either due to lack of self- worth or hearing others criticize them. A Case in point is Korea, a country with the highest rate of cosmetic surgeries since their country puts a lot of pressure on beauty, people with disadvantageous appearance may struggle with discrimination.The other reason is for medical treatment. Some people are just unlucky compared to their peers and suffer deformities resulting from accidents or natural birth. Individuals like severely burned patients, acid attack victims or agent Orange survivor offsprings can have undesirable appearances in a society that puts more emphasis on outside looks. Therefore, the help of cosmetic surgeries can greatly improve those poeple’s daily life when interacting with others.
Overall, this is a positive development as more opportunities are given to underprivileged people. Individuals with more self-confidence have greater chances of success in both their relationships and career paths. For example, when applying for jobs, attractive interviewees can have a better impression which increase the chance of getting hired. Having a more pleasing look means more opportunities to find a partner as everyone loves a good looking person with good manners.
In conclusion, lack of confidence and medical purposes are the main reason why people look for cosmetic operations. This trend has open new doors towards job opportunities and relationships for the disabled and the unfortunate, which prove its positiveness for the community as a whole.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The
...arance may struggle with discrimination.The other reason is for medical treatment. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, really, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56050955414 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14431059458 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608280254777 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8740970052 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.4 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28578853644 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886412217168 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338674537057 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151374446468 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424564331212 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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