Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
What other measures do you think might be effective?
Pollution from burning fossil fuel is one of our modern day problem. Governments have taken several steps to deter this problem where charging high for petrol is one of them. I entirely agree with the statement but other steps like imposing import duty for cars and improving public transport can help the process.
Firstly, in order to run a car people needs to buy gas so, simply by increasing the price of petrol will automatically discourage a certain portion of people to buy petrol. Specially, people who are on a tight budget, this will force them to think elsewhere. If we look closely then it becomes clear that the country where petrol price is relatively low tend to cause more air pollution. United Arab Emirates can be a good example of this, where per capita pollution is higher than any other country in the world.
Secondly, Only charging high for fuel everywhere may not bring our desirable outcome. Price needs to be higher where air pollution is relatively higher so that people will be reluctant to buy gas in that particular area. For example, Dhaka city in Bangladesh is crippled with air pollution so, the government may charge higher for petrol in Dhaka then any other places in the country.
Actually, by only increasing the price of petrol alone will not bring much fruitfulness. It is the responsibility of the government to give people the option to find an alternative to their cars. Most people these days are forced to drive finding to alternative. Government needs to build adequate public transport system as reliable as reliable as private transports. Increasing import tax on cars and at the same time giving people the option to use public transport will bring down the fossil fuel consumption.
In conclusion, Charging high for petrol maybe the best available solution but only this method alone cannot confront the pollution crisis hence other steps need to be taken.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95652173913 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60028962132 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7747594366 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.75 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130484451842 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440227700739 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349499395185 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795951726532 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219919303092 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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