It is an undeniable fact that information technology has been playing an essential role in almost all aspects of our lives. Gradually, it manipulates most of our activities, from doing house chores to solving tasks at schools and workplaces. To be perfectly honest, technology is an indispensable device in humans' lives. However, there are also some disadvantages that need to be seriously considered and attenuated.
On the positive side, information technology ushers in an entirely new era for all humans. To each individual, it brings necessary information for students to study and for scientists to convey various development research. The IT industry also provides occupation opportunities to a large group of employees. To society as a whole, the more people get jobs and get paid satisfyingly, the more developed and prosperous the society becomes. Besides, technology is a necessary tool in managing staff and information, the two most important factors of any kind of organization.
On the negative side, depending too much on information technology can instigate many regrettable consequences. Firstly, if students and employees rely on theoretical information on the internet 24/7, they will be not able to think and handle practical problems directly and independently. Secondly, virtual connection on the internet via technology is increasing the distance among humans. Take online learning and working for a typical instance, this method has been applied in many countries and gradually increased invisible distance among teachers and students, managers and personnel.
In conclusion, the IT industry brings numberable benefits along with drawbacks to all humans. As a result, to exploit the benefits completely, we need to take the disadvantages into serious account and steadily take appropriate actions to dwindle their impacts.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63214285714 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22255879761 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614285714286 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4499637155 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.133333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231880980032 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066745945675 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532570071623 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120419469087 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527680547777 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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