Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace (e.g. at home, when travelling etc.). Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages?
It is no longer strange to see people working from home or anywhere outside their office, thanks to the advance of information technology. Personally, when it comes to mobility, this trend brings about more pros than cons
On the one hand, without the need of going to work, gradually people will be drifted apart along with the disruption of office buildings. It is true that with access to the Internet, people could fulfill their obligations without the assistance of anyone else, thus, impairing the relationship between colleagues. Moreover, as people’s demands for workplace progressively decrease, those buildings erected for work-related purposes would be put to an end sooner or later
On the other hand, it is undoubtedly being able to work everywhere is of paramount advantage. Specifically, if people do not have to leave their house for work, they will not need to use any transportation or get dressed, hence saving not only more money but time. Also, people can seize more opportunities when not being required to attend in many places for interviews, as well as tremendous convenience and comfort can be gained when there are not any eyes around them. For instance, in this pandemic, many people are unable to go to their office because of the lockdown, fortunately, they can still earn money through working online
To conclude, it is fascinating to see how developed our technology these days get that can allow workers to work beyond their workplace boundaries. Although both positivity and negativity can be found in this phenomenon, I strongly believe that its bright side can out shadow its drawbacks because of the countless opportunities and convenience it has
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, still, thus, well, for instance, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18181818182 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89940204722 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629090909091 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.3247929855 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.125 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.375 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.75 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255886137891 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109120139807 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629479199308 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148413351229 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484748649464 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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