" Intelligence is the key to success"
Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Success is a major topic of concern in modern society. It is argued that intellectual ability plays a crucial role in achieving success. Personally, I partly agree with this idea for some following reasons.
On the one hand, there are two main reasons to believe that intelligence can lead to success. The first one is that smart people are believed to have the ability to process information and learn essential skills faster. Thus they can accumulate more extensive lessons and handle their work more effectively, which is crucial for gaining promotion to high positions. In addition, intelligent students usually do well at school and are more likely to pursue higher academic education in a university or college. As a result, they will have more opportunities to do a successful profession.
On the other hand, intelligence aside, to achieve success, we need many other important factors such as regular practice. The most successful students are not always the ones who are the most intelligent, but instead those who practice and make revisions frequently to accumulate valuable experiences. For example, when recruiting for important positions in the company like managers, employers often prioritize candidates with more experience than smart ones. Besides, there are many careers requiring skills that you can not achieve without practice, such as chefs or athletes.
In conclusion, with all the reasons mentioned above, I do believe that while intelligence takes the lion’s share in the ability to succeed, it seems to me that if you do not practice and learn from your mistakes, you may not attain the accomplishment you desire
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...tion and learn essential skills faster. Thus they can accumulate more extensive less...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, may, so, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28517110266 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89279405703 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615969581749 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5500650556 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.923076923 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25765205655 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811080047574 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632825752205 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15574175623 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533242244264 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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