Many people think that the intelligence is the most important trait of leadership. Although, to become a successful and effective leader, a person needs to have some of leadership skills such as charisma, assertiveness, empathy and social skills; I agree and in favor of this opinion.
On the one hand, intelligence is a trait of business acumen, political savvy, a deep understanding of social issues, and knowledge. Anyone could learn how to make good decisions, analyze data or deal with clients, but intelligence is a personal characteristic, which belongs to the mind, you can not learn it at any school. An intelligent leader is a person who has a good understanding of what needs to be done, and what is going to change. He or she will then make decisions based on their feeling, and using their head.
On the other hand, a clever man has capabilities that make people want to follow him, which is a characteristic of charisma. This enables him to influence others in situations such as voting for a project he leads, or adopting a proposal. In addition, intelligence is an additive to leadership skills. If empathy skill is an understanding of how people feel, the intelligent man will understand this better and faster than others. It means that a person with cognitive intelligence stands a better chance of success in business than those without.
In conclusion, a good leader could lack some leadership skills, except intelligence. I support the opinion that success depends on how your brain works.
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.142361111111 0.155533422707 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0833333333333 0.0946595960268 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0138888888889 0.0501214627716 28% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0451388888889 0.0437548338989 103% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114583333333 0.122226691241 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0173611111111 0.0403226058552 43% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.07011596252 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.03125 0.0326793684256 96% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.107638888889 0.0861772015684 125% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0173611111111 0.021408717616 81% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.03125 0.011925033212 262% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1511.0 1933.35771543 78% => OK
No of words: 253.0 316.048096192 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97233201581 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.359683794466 0.374742101984 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.256916996047 0.28420135186 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.177865612648 0.203846283523 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.142292490119 0.137316102897 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07011596252 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.037074148 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573122529644 0.56093040696 102% => OK
Word variations: 57.7266927148 60.7387585426 95% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 19.4615384615 20.7743622355 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2076571273 49.517814964 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.230769231 127.492653851 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7743622355 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.615384615385 0.814263465372 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 45.1532380663 49.1944974215 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.89655172414 1.69124875643 112% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259997100586 0.332605444948 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0807349760768 0.102741220458 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0429754364029 0.0668466124924 64% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.503043453875 0.534860350844 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.112082593854 0.148594505496 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103153239976 0.134430193775 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533316540035 0.0742795772207 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.255181844768 0.324371583561 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0723498238099 0.0638462369009 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173016791368 0.228012699653 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279667391816 0.058150111329 48% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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