International tourism is now the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, it brings rather tension than understanding between the people from cultures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Currently, with the globalised world and the general decrease in traveling cost, international tourism is becoming more and more prevalent. Some people argue that the continuous and steady growth of transnational traveling inevitably leads to tension and conflicts at times that are difficult to resolve. I partly agree with this view.
To begin with, it is clearly seen that global traveling creates pressure between people from distinct distances. First and foremost, among the forces contributing to the tension behind these cross – cultural encounters, those of languages barriers are perhaps the most prominent. For example, that international travelers do not have good command of the language spoken in destinations may have trouble on understanding or expressing their feelings or ideas. Communication with foreigners has always been difficult and can lead to misunderstandings or conflicts even with the help of a tour guide or interpreter. Furthermore, differences in customs and traditions may also produce quite a lot of unpleasantness during a journey. Travelers can find it very hard to adapt to the customs or cultures of the countries they visit or can have some behaviors which are not suitable with the locals, which can impact or even bother the residents.
Nevertheless, the effects from transnational tourism are not all negatives. They can educate the local people about the life in another part of the world. These international travelers are like the ambassadors for their countries. Both tourists’ and locals’ perspectives of cultural distinctiveness from all over the world can be significantly broadened. It is fair to say that the development can open up more opportunities for people from all over the world to establish relationships with local inhabitants.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that much as cross-border travel can cause tension, its influences are also the good ones.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51178451178 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28452170775 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585858585859 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9059908944 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.133333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177105646179 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649577178003 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431262168477 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103771258533 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498645814001 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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