International travel is becoming cheaper and more and more countries open their door and with more and more tourists Do the advantages of the increased tourism outweigh its disadvantages
International tourism was not so prevalent in the bygone era, while it is one of the world’s fastest- growing industries. There are both pros and cons of tourism. However, the advantages are far more than disadvantages.
There are several reasons associated with of why many countries have built willingness to welcome tourists. Primarily, developed and developing countries consider the tourism as their economy driver and GDP booster. Thus, they are proactively promoting their renowned tourist places. Additionally, business such as restaurants, clubs at tourist spots receives an opportunity to thrive as they forge regular income. Indeed, in such good latitude other business including grocery suppliers and filling stations try to establish by proving services to companies and tourists. On a whole, this trend gives birth to stronger economy and jobs. Lastly, it facilitates tourist to meet the people of host country. This exchange in return helps both parties to understand other cultures and values to great extent. Thus, not only tourist but also natives acquire deeper understanding about others.
Unequivocally, international tourism is two sides of same coin. In tourism, the host nation experiences the disguised visitors. They could be terrorists or spies from other country. Such visitors are a threat to country’s security and peace. Identifying threat is daunting task for the host country. They might be impersonating religious heads who have sole purpose of egging public for their wrong purpose. What is more, there is possibility that a naïve visitor to fall in trap. For some locals, the visitors are easy pray as they are in unfamiliar territory and have wealthy items such as jewellery which can be easily sold out in market for profit.
To conclude, although there are some negative effects of tourism, it is the best policy to stay connected with various countries. This facilitates knowledge and tolerance in people that alleviate differences and helps to grow economy and jobs. At the same time, visitors have to respectful and aware during the visit.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, lastly, so, thus, well, while, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39024390244 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84078291862 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621951219512 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.621856794 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8695652174 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2608695652 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30434782609 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159585888032 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428131577744 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528364614145 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950567178087 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533690032485 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.39 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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