International travel can make people prejudiced rather than broad minded. Why people fail to benefit when they travel? What we can do to improve their understanding of the countries they visit?
It is true that rather than having numbers of exotic cuisine and cultures, some tourists fail to benefit when they travel. The reasons for this problem are varied and there are some measures that should be taken into consideration to heighten visitors’ understanding of the host countries.
There are two main explanations for this issue. Fristly, the travel expenses in some famous tourist destinations, Ha Long Bay in Vietnam for example, might be grossly inflated. As a matter of fact, some travelers may be overcharged for anything from a taxi, a meal from a restaurant to buying a souvenir, which makes visitors hold negative attitude towards the host nation. Secondly, the problem of wate disposal, pollution and the unregulated construction of hotels in many tourist attractions also discourage tourists from exploring the richness of far-flung destinations. For example, many beach resorts in Thailand have become cocrete jungles of high-rise hotels and apartments, preventing travelers from enjoying the beautiful landscape.
There are several effective approaches to improve the visitors’ understanding of the host nation. Travelers should access a huge storage of information through online platform to broaden their knowledge about the countries they visit. By having a thorought insight into tourist destinations, visitors will be better prepared to avoid situations which they may be overcharged, enabling them to enjoy the richness of the host nation ‘s customs and practices. Additonally, governments should enforce strict regulations on the tourism industry, ensuring that the amount of rubbish released into the environment and the construction of hotels are regulated. By doing this, visitors will be motivated to explore the rich historical heritage of tourist destinations, heightening their understanding of the countries
In conclusion, although there are several reasons why some tourists become prejudiced rather than broad- minded when they visit other nations, some effective measures should be taken into account to tackle this problem
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72258064516 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03925753571 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564516129032 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.8902361589 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.833333333 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184288014976 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717495100253 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802834347963 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13037843055 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459345190408 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.