The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over past few years/decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive.
What are your opinions on this?
The Internet has significantly brought changes to our lives in recent years. Yet, there remains some disagreement as to whether the overall changes/effects have been positive or negative. While there are valid arguments to the contrary, I personally believe that the benefits of the Internet far its drawbacks. These benefits are twofold below.
First of all, it is an indisputable/disagreeable fact that the Internet has revolutionized the way we communicate. Despite the risk of social isolation – a problem occasionally seen in people who spend excessive time at their computer terminal rather than relating to people in real life. Most of us greatly benefit from email and internet device. These useful and powerful tools incredibly facilitate both contact with beloved ones in faraway places and global trade.
Equally importantly, though, the Internet has placed the entire word (and all of the information in it) at our fingertips. In earlier times, conducting research entailed long hours searching library shelves. Now, nevertheless, the identify information can be accessed at the click of the button. Admittedly, not all of the information available on the Internet which is reliable or helpful – there is a various number of material online that some would be considered offensive and dangerous., ranging from pornography to instruction on how to make a bomb. Nonetheless, I would contend that this free flow of info has a very positive benefits/development.
By the way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that the Internet has had a positive impact on modern life because of its influence on communication and the free flow of information.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...s. Yet, there remains some disagreement as to whether the overall changes/effects have been p...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
... in faraway places and global trade. Equally importantly, though, the Internet has p...
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Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...Internet has placed the entire word and all of the information in it at our fingertips. In...
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Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ing library shelves. Now, nevertheless, the identify information can be accessed at the clic...
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Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...he click of the button. Admittedly, not all of the information available on the Internet w...
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Line 5, column 632, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'benefit'?
Suggestion: benefit
...s free flow of info has a very positive benefits/development. By the way of conclusio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, while, as to, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36363636364 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38699065444 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643939393939 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4952589667 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.142857143 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161659288668 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541936244165 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070691592681 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934247564473 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0934468392179 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.