The internet has made information handy,, at the same time, it is adversely affecting our children with all the adult content. Should children be kept away from the internet?
Modern age couldn't imagine the world without internet as it has become the part of our daily life. Both the pros and cons have their own extremity levels. If properly operated it will serve us or else it will rule us. The two faces of internet was discussed below.
Undoubtedly, the web is a heaven for almost all thr Students as it contributes a lot in achieving academic prosperity. Basically, the net has changed the audacity of learning geography in the most effective way with zooming 360° of a satellite map, which in the past is confined to 2D diagrams in a text book. Though libraries contributed a lot, the only disadvantage is the quantity. Where as, the web gives acces to almost every book that is written in all times. Surely, researchers benefits a lot through the journals to be updated by the new discoveries. It is impossible for a student to buy every book that caught his interest, so the cheap way to get to them is just a click away.
Unfortunately, the thing that offers a lot also has the uglier side to pull us to dark dungeon probably where there is no way out. Porn is increasing day by day and the most intelligent and effective children are falling for it. Naturally, children are curious about the things which they never knew before and this curiousity and the ads on study websites acts as a bait. Several studies reveal that children that regularly watch adult content soon drift into isolation and there by developing depression and suicidal tendencies. Do they watch and leave? It's better it let them do so but it evokes them to try those on themselves or on others without their consent which eventually led them to get a attemptive rapists or a bad guy label in society no matter how good his academic record is
According to me, parents need to practice what they preach as children look upto them as a role models. They should place computer or other gadgets, in which internet is accessible, in a hall area and monitor their actions instead of placing it in bedroom. A child lock is a must thing to do to inorder to prevent child from porn monster. It is in their hands to let their children make use of all benefits of internet and protect them from its darker side.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
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Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Whereas'?
Suggestion: Whereas
... the only disadvantage is the quantity. Where as, the web gives acces to almost every bo...
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Line 5, column 700, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...onsent which eventually led them to get a attemptive rapists or a bad guy label i...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...tter how good his academic record is According to me, parents need to practice what they pre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57035175879 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56711753177 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58040201005 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3729439271 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7368421053 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9473684211 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.21052631579 7.06120827912 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168965861855 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438193178252 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437514645989 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923971488499 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402942795575 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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