The internet has vastly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
In recent times, our knowledge about the world has been greatly updated due to the advent of the internet. Although there are some downfalls of this development, I believe it is a great achievement of the human being till that date.
There are some concerns about the easy availability of the internet. First and foremost is that cyber crimes are more prevalent because of the internet. Hackers easily steal important information about technology, which may be used for dangerous purposes such as the hacking of nuclear technology by some countries may become a cause of the destruction of the world. Another reason is that the privacy of individuals might be breached due to the advancement of the internet. For instance, posting photos online on social media such as Facebook and Instagram increase people's vulnerability to exposure to threads. Thus, freely web surfing has some dangerous aspects.
However, there are a number of reasons why this development has significant advantages. First of all, by sharing information by intelligence agencies, crimes can be reduced and surveillance technology can be improved to a great extent. For example, borders can be regulated by security cameras for intruders. Apart from this, the internet is also necessary for imparting education to the masses who live in any corner of the world. By web conferencing technique, lectures and seminars are easily conducted in many regions virtually. Finally, placing an order for different things through the internet becomes less costly after the advent of Amazon. Hence, it is clear it is beneficial in many ways.
In conclusion, while the internet has some drawbacks, their uses outweigh their disadvantages. Therefore, I argue that information sharing through the internet is a milestone for human prosperity.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, apart from, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34035087719 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94966493655 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585964912281 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.052686113 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5294117647 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7647058824 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4117647059 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152945731759 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477348834656 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367760878747 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898275343005 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285227996492 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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