The Internet is now used all around the world as a source of information and communication. However, it's often controversial, so many people think it needs to be controlled. Others believe there should be no interference whatsoever.
Discuss both points of view, and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
It is known that the Internet is the global net that is used all over the world to find any data or to communicate virtually. Nevertheless, some people believe that the Internet must be controlled, while others sure that there are must not be any interference. This essay will consider both statements, however, I think that the Internet must be supervised because it refer to the safety of humanity.
On the one hand, The Internet is the source of worldwide data, where human could find whatever he/she wants. However, if the internet is not supervised, the level of cyber crime may increase. The stealing personal information of the man and using it in the purpose of a fraud is one of the examples. The other reason, why I think it is important to be supervised, it is safety of the children, who may accidentally watch 18+ content, which will affect to their psychology. Moreover, virtual communication will not be safe anymore, if there is no control system. People could not make new friends or find their love through the Internet.
On the other hand, blocking the data has its negative drawbacks as hiding information. For example, Kazakhstan is always blocking some sites and data. Therefore, men do not know some current state situation and live in the informational vacuum.
To conclude, many men think that the Internet should be controlled, while others do not think so. I think that controlling of the internet is beneficial for the humans, because of safety issues, but it has disadvantages as blocking data from society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'refers'?
Suggestion: refers
... Internet must be supervised because it refer to the safety of humanity. On the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95785440613 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82305548196 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544061302682 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5209864232 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4285714286 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302627674422 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961160363295 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826054850044 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175868952013 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918642760679 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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