The Internet is now used all around the world as a source of information and communication. However, it's often controversial, so many people think it needs to be controlled. Others believe there should be no interference whatsoever.
Discuss both points of view, and give your opinion.
Nowadays, the internet brings various benefits for people, such as: working, studying, communication or entertainment. However, some people believe that the internet should be under control while others think opposite. In my opinion, people just controlled the use of the internet partly because information seekers should know two sides of a thing to complete their tasks in the best way. However, children should be banned for the deteriorative information until they have strong cognitive.
First of all, the internet is a crucial tool to whittle down distance between internet users and their demands. In the past, students had to go to school for studying, but with the development of the internet, pupils can join in any class whenever they want. For example, a Vietnamese student can take part in a class in Australian school via the internet. Moreover, the internet is a necessary device to help employees to continue their work without coming to their workplaces in some circumstances. With the widespread of Covid-19 pandemic, work from home is a ubiquitously type of work for employees by using the internet. Therefore, staffs are not only successfully complete their tasks, but also ensure about their health.
In contrast, people must agree with website providers to explore their personal information by using the internet. It is because the website providers are usually save details and information about users to explore the need of users for contribute their customers’ goods. We can easily see that when using Facebook after shopping online, at that time, Facebook’s algorithms try to display a range of products we need. Besides, the internet has variety of latent dangerous for users, especially children as they undoubtedly access to violent websites freely without their parent’s observation. For instance, parents are too busy to spend time with their children so giving them an electronic device to searching freely is pretty ubiquitous in nowadays.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 562, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...of Covid-19 pandemic, work from home is a ubiquitously type of work for employees...
^
Line 2, column 562, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('ubiquitously') instead an adjective, or a noun ('type') instead of another adjective.
...of Covid-19 pandemic, work from home is a ubiquitously type of work for employees by using the inte...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'saved'.
Suggestion: saved
...cause the website providers are usually save details and information about users to ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 739, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...o searching freely is pretty ubiquitous in nowadays.
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in contrast, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36217948718 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85790877866 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599358974359 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.4031984594 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.533333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17623278531 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676979590915 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713562710457 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135706879462 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909161486626 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 562, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...of Covid-19 pandemic, work from home is a ubiquitously type of work for employees...
^
Line 2, column 562, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('ubiquitously') instead an adjective, or a noun ('type') instead of another adjective.
...of Covid-19 pandemic, work from home is a ubiquitously type of work for employees by using the inte...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'saved'.
Suggestion: saved
...cause the website providers are usually save details and information about users to ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 739, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...o searching freely is pretty ubiquitous in nowadays.
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in contrast, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36217948718 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85790877866 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599358974359 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.4031984594 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.533333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17623278531 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676979590915 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713562710457 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135706879462 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909161486626 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.