It is becoming increasingly popular for people to travel to tourist destinations during public holidays. What problems does this cause? What solutions are there to these problems?
It is not uncommon to find an increasing number of people spend their holidays in another city or country. I believe such phenomenon could give rise to serious environmental problems and and solutions including imposing tax and promoting awareness could be used to tackle these problems.
The main concern for the popularity of holiday travels would be environmental pollutions. On one hand, transports tourists taking to reach their destinations, including airplanes, private cars and railways, all rely on the burning of fossil fuel which would emit carbon dioxide and other polluted gases, therefore deteriorating global air quality. On the other hand, purchasing and consuming a range of products without proper recycle, visitors would add more pressure on local environment. For example, a used-to-be hotspot, Phuket island now attracts less visitors because of its dirty beaches where tourists found easy to spot plastic bags and food remains.
In order to address this problem, a two-step method could be implemented. Firstly, a green tax should be imposed to all transports during holidays to reduce less long-distance and unnecessary travels. Nowadays cheap air travels offered by Lion airlines and other affordable airlines provide an easy access for the public to travel around the world, so charging environmental tax to increase the travel cost would make potential travelers think twice before heading to any destinations. Secondly, it is vitally important to promote eco-friendly awareness among visitors, and broadcasting local environment rules on flight or train before arriving would be a good receipt. As a result, individuals would be more aware and alert of their behavior, contributing to more sustainable developments in the attraction city.
To conclude, while increasing holiday travel engenders more environmental problems, efforts including charging a green tax and promote eco-friendly awareness could be exerted to solve these problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: and
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'easy access'.
Suggestion: easy access
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65993265993 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00643047095 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632996632997 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9457864736 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.083333333 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173751569082 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649228992207 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502896242865 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10824976684 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260623347922 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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