It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree?
It is a common trend that graduates are more likely to make their own decision in terms of accommodation. Whereas some believe that students will experience difficult challenges without parental supervision, I am of the idea that moving out for independent self-care shall bring people a brand new perspective.
On the one hand, when a family lives as a unit, younger members will possibly set asides their financial worries as they focus more on their personal education rather than finding an optimal solution to earn a living. As a matter of fact, a majority of Asian parents who share the same house with their children usually play a significant role in family's financial ability. In other words, children can spare more of their free time fulfilling their interests or hobbies, which acts as a medication to a better mental health. Some members of the young generation claim that it is satisfying and entertaining when hanging out with their friends at recreational centers, the malls in particular, during time-off from school.
On the other hand, solely young adults including university students gain a deep and thorough insight into the benefits gained when living away from parents. Taking social skills into consideration, the absence of parental involvement in daily activities forces the young minds to expose to unpleasant situations and learn how to cope with the harsh reality of this world. For example, there is no one else but the students themselves have to fight for their own rights and equality if joining a foreign community. By doing so, their personality should be shaped in the toughest way as possible and obviously far more different than the ones staying with their parents. Such people have higher chance to be successful in the future.
In conclusion, rewards are saved for particular individuals who are willing to take risk to move out of their comfort zone. To my mind, living away from home is a crucial step when people grow up.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...ssible and obviously far more different than the ones staying with their parents. Su...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, whereas, for example, in conclusion, in particular, as a matter of fact, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04892966361 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70913494187 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636085626911 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.3345099496 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1538461538 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288621659952 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876132852986 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629656268318 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155433302615 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632143538947 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.