It is better to live in a city than in a small town. Do you agree?
Many people prefer to live in cities than in small towns, mainly because there are more employment opportunities, and also because it is more interesting.
One advantage of living in a city is it is much easier to find work. Most large companies are located in cities as well as numerous small businesses and service industries. In addition, there are government departments which employ large numbers of people. Another benefit of living in a city is there is a wide range of entertainment. There are cinemas, where the latest films are shown, cafes and clubs, people meet socially and also concert and exhibitions. Moreover, food lover can visit a variety of restaurants which serve both local and international cuisine. Finally, education is better in cities, due to the many schools and universities, which are rarely found in small towns. Furthermore, cities offer a variety of learning opportunities, both formal and informal, such as language and cookery courses.
However, there also drawbacks of living in a city. Firstly, cities are usually very crowded. This means that suitable accommodation is expensive and difficult to find. What is more, as so many people travel around the city, public transportation is often full and uncomfortable, particularly during the rush hour. Secondly, cities are usually polluted. This includes pollution from emissions, industry and also household waste. Low quality of air in a city can harm human immune system.
In conclusion, although there are many disadvantages of living in a city, I believe it is better to live in a town.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20784313725 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98213571291 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58431372549 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6157353663 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1176470588 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.17647058824 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260330980919 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754609659096 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707489935565 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169999823674 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555919854066 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.