It is generally believed that the Internet is an excellent means of communication, but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information.
It is true that in modern life, the free flow of information affects significantly to our lives. While many people suppose that the network is an intelligent way which plays an important role in daily life, I would argue that it is not the best way to update the reliable information.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why many people tend to use the Internet as the main medium to read the news, plays games, and listen to music. One reason is that finding information on the World Wide Web is much more convenient compared to the traditional method. By a simple click, they can easily access a world of knowledge concerning the media-rich society such as education, public health, and economy via smart phones or laptops instead of going to the newsstands in order to buy newspapers. In addition, they will broaden their knowledge if they connect with people around the world through the Internet. To be specific, they not only understand in regard to the attractive cultures but also enhance their English skills because they have countless opportunities to speak, hear, read and write English constantly.
On the other hand, I believe that the Internet able to not be a good place to seek for latest information. Firstly, almost information in the network is free, so the appearance of the tabloid journalism is really popular in comparison with formal documents which are released by the prestigious publishers, lead to choosing the correct source of information in the network is very hard. Secondly, people who are addicted to surfing the Internet, instead of taking part in outdoor activities, are more prone to obesity. Going out and communicating with people may bring the good chances to obtain a lot of real experience and skills in their life without the Internet.
In conclusion, although there are many benefits from the Internets, it seems to me that it is not the best method to bring up to date information.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in regard to, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93009118541 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74769346626 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.6663431667 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.166666667 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4166666667 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.75 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192719709766 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666545624117 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627342818523 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104870247977 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373543104449 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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