It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, It is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
How to train children to be skillful at things has become a long-standing question. While the belief that talents are born, not made has gained popularity, others support the idea of providing training to transform a child into a good sports player or musician.
There're a couple of reasons for thinking that talents are natural. First is the high possibility of getting good features biologically. If parents make a living by playing sports professionally, a high chance is their children can also be pretty healthy and active. Besides these cases, many geniuses who have no advantageous background have been studied for years. When looking into their profiles which usually include the upbringing environment and other elements, it's hard to find a connection with their mastery. As a result, people have concluded that these individuals are born with their talents. In brief, a good number of gifted people either get it from their family or simply from Mother Nature.
On the other hand, there's a saying "Practice makes it perfect". Researchers have found that with 10,000 hours of practice, anyone can acquire a skill. Schools and parents could play a crucial role as well by applying appropriate teaching methods and the understanding of each child's strengths and weaknesses. Furthermore, with the Internet and its applications such as Social Media and Youtube, there are undoubtedly numerous resources children can take advantage of. In conclusion, adequate practice and proper training are key to a kid's learning process.
Despite reasons mentioned promoting proper training, from my experience, music and sports are experiential areas that have a lot to do with doing rather than knowing. Consequently, a kid can learn how to play sports and music relatively well but it takes gifts for them to be outstanding.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, look, so, well, while, in brief, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27397260274 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95238850099 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650684931507 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8813553845 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.25 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254005832439 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719684519481 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521676330125 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146442178797 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047123587701 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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