It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about what factors determine a people become successful in sport or music. While their talent is of genetic origin to some extent, I would argue that their effort in practicing makes them become a master in sport or music also.
On the one hand, it is true that a part of individual has talented ability when they were born. For example, Mozart composed songs when he was only 3 years old, normally, a child can not write a song at that age. These people have foundation from very young age, therefore, it may lead to the achievement in the future. Furthermore, parents who are good at these fields is the biggest motivation makes children become talented. It is no doubt that a singer's son can sing as well as his father.
On the other hand, to achieve a good person of sport or music, most of people have to learn very hard. Firstly, it derives from the passion without having any available ability. For example, an opera singer in Italy was considered that she can not sing, but after the process of practicing, she became a well-known opera singer in the world and demonstrated that practicing makes perfect. Secondly, it can be seen that, a person are born with a good voice but it would not make sense if he does not learn how to harmonize his voice in a song. As a result, a person who even has ability or not can not achieve success without learning.
In conclusion, I believe it is better for people to become good at sport or music is practicing and should not disregard learning to depend on genius.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 251, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... them become a master in sport or music also. On the one hand, it is true that a ...
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Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'singers'' or 'singer's'?
Suggestion: singers'; singer's
... become talented. It is no doubt that a singers son can sing as well as his father. ...
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Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...chieve a good person of sport or music, most of people have to learn very hard. Firstly, it de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54838709677 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44930092834 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566308243728 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8699112425 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6153846154 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3846153846 7.06120827912 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292363087168 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954211408719 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678428385396 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183867042729 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410958507961 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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