It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives.
Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages
In our life, when we try to achieve something, there will be risks. People need to admit their risks, both in the work and in their private lives. I think that take risks will give more benifits than disavantages and this essay will give my opinion.
First and foremost, take risks helps people avoid making the same mistakes as they did. There are a lot you can learn from your mistake: How did it happen? What did it affect? How serious is it? But most importantly you understand and avoid the same mistakes later. As a case of this point, I did my math homework, I mistakenly wrote -1 to +1, the result was I was wrong, I accept that and learn from it for later, from then on I will pay more attention, don't make such mistakes again.
Secondly, admit the risks helps create credibility. When we are open and honest about the mistakes you make, it can help you build trust and integrity in the office. When we lie or blame others, we look deceitful and scary. To illustrate this point, my friend, she name is Chinh, she worked in groups, but because of her miscalculation, her group drops in class. Instead of hiding, she admits her mistakes, people feel she is honest, trustworthy, instead of being hated for avoiding mistakes, she creates credibility by accepting mistakes.
In conclusion, take risks give more benifits than disavantages because it helps people learn from that mistake and create people's trust.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.676 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47444862545 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.8035934364 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9333333333 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183456232548 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621810976183 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663219757458 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124470903397 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051114955807 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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