It is inevitable that as technology develops so traditional cultures must be lost. Technology and tradition are incompatible - you cannot have both together.
To what extent do you agree with this view?
Glancing through the pages of a typical newspaper, we are bound to see that a myriad of columns written by people from all walks of life discussing whether technology and tradition are compatible or not. Some suggest that those two are rival of each other, it is my personal belief that technology and tradition is correlated. two of principal reasons for this are as follows.
For a start, the creations of new products or inventions are base on the traditions. it is almost impossible for people to brain storm a new improvement without the knowledge or existence of the original stuff. For instance, in order to have an advance on computer software, programers should consider on top of the old version of that software to do modifications. Hence, it is obvious that technology is actually the extension of tradition, in other words, technology develops is another form of tradition which reveals that technology and tradition are compatible.
Moreover, technology develops and traditional products can be combined to achieve an even greater success. it is prevalent that designers use the elements from the old fashion to generate a new products. Take games as an example, Mario Cart was a historical games for many years ago. As the game device was become less popular, it hardly existed by using traditional device. However, after the game producer took the element from it and put it into a new device, the Switch, it had a great successful. Therefore, it is possible for the news and the olds to survive at the same time.
By and large, I once again reaffirm my view that technology advances and tradition cultures is able to coexist. Not only do they come from the same origin, but they also can be combined to attain a greater success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, by and large, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91946308725 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79873215423 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573825503356 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6496498585 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209540195396 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655405579569 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763485064209 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131495966009 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324681889572 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.