It is much more convenient to watch movie on television or computer than buy a ticket and go to the cinema. In the nearest future the popularity of cinemas will drastically decline. Do you agree or disagree?
It is commonly argued that the people like to watching movies on television and computer nowadays rather then in the movie theater. I agree with this statement that the percentages of people who like to go cinema will decrease in the future because popularity of internet and television is increasing very fast and it is more convenient due to less time consuming and money saving.
Firstly, mostly people prefer to watch movie at home because these days everyone are busy in work and study so they do not have much time to watch movie in movie hall. Whenever they free from their busy schedule like to spend much time at home by watching movie in TV and on internet while sleeping on bed or sitting on comfortable sofa and feel relax rather then get stuck in traffic and go to cinema. In addition, by using internet, people can watch movie anywhere such as in train or bus as well as in flight at that time people are often free and like to watch movie while travelling. Thus internet and TV are good choice to watch movie instead film theater due to this people can save time.
Secondly, Technology is growing very fast so people can find broad range of movie list on just one click so they can see plethora of movies by giving just one month internet package it is cheap than buy ticket at the cinema hall and watch only one movie by one ticket. Furthermore, TRP competition increases between movies channels so they release new movie on television as soon as possible that's why people prefer to watch movie at home and save money.
In conclusion, watching movie on TV and computer is a very good mode for people who are very busy in their life and want entertainment for reduce stress and relax and save time, money as well. thus popularity of watching movie in the movie hall will drop down in the nearest future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56838905775 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31167354774 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48632218845 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.6092748585 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.3 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.9 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28556357957 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13192676372 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058005748847 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19143099835 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546704447833 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.82 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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