It is said that "Not everything that is learned is contained in books" Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which is more important ? why ?
Some people believe books are not the only source of knowledge. They think people could obtain their knowledge of real life from experience which it is not always found in the books. In this essay, I would compare knowledge gained from the books and the experience.
There are two understanding that we learn from the books. Firstly, books are the place that we acquire a knowledge of science. Mostly, encyclopedia and study books are the most used by people to do that. In addition, the are many new things that could be invented by people which have a lot of benefits to mankind. Secondly, information about the history of our country also we gain from the book. Therefore, people could imagine how the fight of the national heroes in defending their homeland. This could build their sense of nationality.
However, there are two soft skills that could not be found in the books but people could obtain them from their experience. To begin with, communication skill could be improved if people do it directly. Usually, it would be feasible by involved in a social activity such as working on the project together in an organization. Moreover, it would help people to adapt to new environment easily. The next one is leadership skill. It also could be gained from the organization by leading projects. As a result, working becomes more effective due to people managing skill.
All in all, I completely agree that the most important knowledge is from people experience. Because it could not be bought by money. But, books also the key for us to see the different parts of the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...used by people to do that. In addition, the are many new things that could be invented ...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nt knowledge is from people experience. Because it could not be bought by money. But, b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8315018315 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61838922025 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531135531136 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4007873894 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.95 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.65 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218039781348 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737689118498 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841600078708 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161525027462 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817001426935 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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