It is seen that older adults are not given enough respect and facilities in many countries. What could be the reason for this? What are effects of this?
Nowadays, there has been a rumour that old people are always begin sad and irritate by somethings and these people do not give enough respects to government and their facilities. Im my opinion, getting older is a gifts, at that stage older people have everything in their lives, for example, families, house, grandchildren etc. however the reason behind older adults do not given enough respect and facilities in many countries is that they do not understand the modern revolution of technology. this essay will briefly explain the effects and reason behind this behaviour.
Firstly, everyone should respect their elder, they are key of everything. For instance, without them, you do even exist, we always thankful for their elder and help them in their difficult times like spending some time with them, teach them the modern technology that they can keep up with society. Secondly, the advance technological lifestyle maybe one of the reason that irritate older people the most, for example, many older adults may not know how to use an internet or modern social life style. All they want a simple and ordinary life. As technology change, many people do not spend their free time in their home with their grandparents, they are always busy chatting and exploring new things on the internet, this is one of reason that they do not give enough respect to latest facilities.
Moreover, every good and bad things have positive and negative effects. In case of technology, there is no doubt that technology has many benefits in life, however, in term of old people lives, its benefits may convert into negative effects. In many cases relationship between old people and their families are become strained.
In conclusion, it is clear that advance technologies are created to help human beings and it is very beneficial to human kinds. however, every good things has their limits, when people cross their limits that things become dangerous to other kind, in this case the other kind in old people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: begun
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a gift' or simply 'gifts'?
Suggestion: a gift; gifts
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the latest'.
Suggestion: to the latest
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...nd their families are become strained. In conclusion, it is clear that advance te...
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Suggestion: However
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01807228916 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49698613513 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536144578313 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9036446786 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212040418527 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773703934283 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815839858434 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126442127076 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103437380521 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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