It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while other believe that life is better in the country side Discuss both side and give your own opinion

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It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while other believe that life is better in the country side. Discuss both side and give your own opinion.

It is certainly true that, taste and preference of people regarding living in city or village differs from person to person. It is often argued that maximum number of people are being fascinated by city life whilst other disagree and think that in comparison to city life, countryside life is better. This essay agree that in urban areas people will able to enjoy more opportunities in every sectors which helps them to achieve their ultimate goals and be fully satisfied with it. This essay will discuss both points of view.
It is clear that most of the people prefer to live in town to grab the infrastructural development like health, education, communication and proper health service to live a standard or quality life which they lack in village. Moreover, living in a city too helps people to develop their career and personality with ability to make unique identity in crowd. It is therefore agreed that urban life is more worthwhile for enhancing the comfort and convenient in human life. For example, this is most evident in my country “Nepal” that city like Kathmandu, Heatuda are being more popularized because of its attractive lifestyle and available of all services.
However, many disagree and feel that apart from city life, rural life is better because of its greenery and peaceful environment with caring as well as sharing people. Similarly, in village people are kind hearted and always ready to help any situation with motto of having we feeling with them. Despite this, we feeling is still possible in city life also as they too have emotions with them. For instance, though people are busy in their workaholic life in town they managed to spend a quality time with family by spreading love with each other.
In conclusion, city area life is very essential for people to fulfill their desire and live quality life, some people still feel that village is best to live peacefully. At last, I personally believe that town life is essential for human being to get wanted service in time and to fulfill emergency needs.

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Average: 7.4 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 313, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'agrees'.
Suggestion: agrees
... countryside life is better. This essay agree that in urban areas people will able to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, regarding, similarly, so, still, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93352601156 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57276899443 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540462427746 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5093820518 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.928571429 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183232772132 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712115684801 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526946886427 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120861389079 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255704491477 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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