The key to solving environmental problems is for the present generation to sacrifice their convenient life (or live a less comfortable life) for the sake of future generations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people think that for the benefit of future generations, and to solve the present day environmental challenges, the current generation should live a less comfortable lifestyle. I completely agree with this statement, as it will be a great step for our planet and the future of mankind.
Firstly, it is a widely known fact that the biggest cause for environmental problems is increased human desires for luxurious lifestyles, which creates an undue pressure on our environment. If the present generation can make a few changes in their everyday life, such as, using paper bags instead of polythene bags for carrying groceries, the worldwide impact of such actions will solve the present day environmental issues to a great extent.
Secondly, there is an impending crisis for future generations due to the depletion of natural resources which is happening at an alarming rate. The judicious usage of these resources by today's generation will ensure a positive outlook for future energy and environment needs for the upcoming generation. To illustrate, in most of the developed countries people have started adopting cycling as their preferred option to commute for work instead of going by cars. As a result, there is a steady decrease in carbon emissions and fuels like oil and gas will last much longer.
Finally, the reason why the sacrifices by people is the need of the hour is that other alternatives like stricter laws by governments have failed to make any impact in solving the environmental problems. The state efforts go in vain due to lack of funds, and manpower to implement the laws. Consequently, people's contribution has become the single most significant factor with the potential to mitigate the environmental challenges and provide a secure future.
To conclude, if the modern day man can make certain cuts from his extravagant lifestyle, it can go a long way in dealing with the environmental crisis of today and secure a better future for mankind.
Comments
Irrefutably, issues related…
Irrefutably, issues related to environment degradation escalating with large ratio. It is argued that in order to improve the quality of atmosphere multitudes should live less comfortable life for the benefit of upcoming generation. Although I agree with this notion, I suggest some other feasible remadies to ameliorate environment problem, in forthcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, nowadays a days air is getting frail day by day. To elucidate it, these days men and women both are a bread winners;therefore, they use private vehicles which have adverse effects on surrounding. To epitome, an article which was published in 'Globe and Mail ' newspaper revealed that in delhi, Capital of india where higher authority announced odd and even method to use vehicle so, odd number vehicle run only on odd days such as, 7,9,11.hence , this tactic assit to decrease pollution.
Moving further, government should ban plastic use. To elaborate it, plastic is not a biodegradable which cause a great harm to atmosphere. For instance, a program which was telecasted on BBC news revealed approximately 14 million tons of plastic became a major reason for the mortality of sea creature. As a result ,it impact on the natural beauty of ocean.
To recapitulate it, I would like to reaffirm that aforementioned reasons shows that no doubt convince of life is essential , but some collaboration are important for the future generation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 187, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, such as, as a result, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16718266254 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94701067111 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.8738973866 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.083333333 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9166666667 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324671987613 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104920825017 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862785052826 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168332436954 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0970952064342 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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