In the last 20years there have been significant developments in the field of information technology (IT), for example the world wide web and communication by email. However, these developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive in the future. To what extent do you agree with this view?
The last two decades has seen enormous changes in the lives of people about the aspect of advance technology. However, it can be argued that in as much as information technology has been beneficial it is likely to do more damage than good in the nearest future.
To begin, communication through email has been of enormous help especially abroad in the areas of business and commerce. Furthermore, the large size of the world-wide web has made it simpler and easier to look up information on any conceivable subjects. For example, people can get access to news, medical advice, online educational course and so on via the internet. it is clear that, access to all these information has made life less complex for people and it will continue to do so in the future.
Nevertheless, not all the technological advancements are beneficial. For instance, communication through email have been found to destroy traditional way of socializing with others.it has affected negatively on the way we interact through letter writing and telephone calls as a way of communication. Likewise, face to face interaction with people is lesser than before which will destroy the way we socialize. it is obvious that, this will be the case if drastic measures are not taken on how to prevent permanent damage to the way we communicate.
In addition, the gigantic size of the web makes it easy to get access to websites and viruses which are not regulated and controlled especially by children. it is known that juveniles look up information which are not right for their ages and this can affect the way and manner they interact or behave in the future. For instance, recently it has been in the lime light about websites who groom youngsters into self harming and ways on how to commit suicide.
In Conclusion, developments in information technology is in no doubt beneficial but are likely to have more negative impacts that positive if they are not regulated and controlled in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...hat in as much as information technology has been beneficial it is likely to do ...
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...ormation technology has been beneficial it is likely to do more damage than good...
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...onal course and so on via the internet. it is clear that, access to all these info...
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...ternet. it is clear that, access to all these information has made life less complex for people a...
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...hich will destroy the way we socialize. it is obvious that, this will be the case ...
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... and controlled especially by children. it is known that juveniles look up informa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, likewise, look, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95195195195 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90847623487 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504504504505 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1289434227 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.785714286 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259123885163 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786704736075 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761874797448 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149044364783 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786847276562 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.