In the last decade, there has been a great increase in global air travel.
What do you think are the reasons for this and do you think it is a good thing?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
International air travel has grown substantially over the past ten years. One of the many reasons is the expansion of the aviation industry all around the world making travel convenient. While this has connected the world globally, one of its negative impacts has been the rise in environmental pollution of the earth.
The rapid growth of the aviation corporation has greatly enhanced the air transportation system making it efficient and convenient for everyone. A few reasons being, travelling from one country to another has become much cheaper and faster than before. People no longer need long holidays or huge budgets to go on a journey, whether it be for pleasure or work. Air transportation is also relatively safer due to the enhanced safety and security protocols that every passenger has to follow when taking flights. For instance, a survey showed that more than half of the US citizens would prefer to take a domestic flight from one city to another instead of driving themselves for long hours due to the safety and time convenience.
On the other hand, the commercialization of air transportation has lead to a detrimental impact on the environment. The release of exhaust fumes from the engines has polluted the skies and damaged the atmosphere, thereby, contributing significantly to global warming. In addition, the noise pollution from the roar of the engines when the planes fly over a residential landscape has greatly impacted the lives of those residing near the airports. For example, the Sao Paulo airport in Brazil is located right next to the beach and although the sight of planes flying quite low adds to the attraction of the tourists it is quite inconvenient for the residents of the city due to the constant noise pollution.
In conclusion, although travelling has been made affordable and efficient by all means over the past decade, it has also added greatly to the air and noise pollution causing a negative impact on the environment.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0736196319 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9482022609 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536809815951 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.9804464198 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.230769231 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156207567431 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537118512508 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.021241478755 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894235779895 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210260893863 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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