Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present To what extent do you agree or disagree

Essay topics:

Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Following the development of human beings, long history has been created and accreted. From some perspectives, those historical events provide no benefit to the current period. However, I stay on the opposite side which I believe that all the knowledge we gain from the past not only has a specific and worthy influence on our present but also our future.
The opinion in favor of the invaluable knowledge from the past for each individual living in the future might be based on the way people learn from the past. As a matter of fact, there are several people who not only learn from the past but also totally immerse themselves in it. Those are who really get stuck in the past, they persist in all the knowledge they learned from history and not ready to acquire progressive knowledge. Consequently, they might lose opportunities to enjoy their present as well as can’t move toward the brighter side of the future. However, I believe if we jump into the conclusion that learning from the past has no value for us because of that, it is quite a shortsighted view.
With regard to learning from the past, the way we learn is foremost. According to all the even occurred in the past, it’s vital to have your own opinion and make an assessment of their positive and negative aspects. From that, you can learn the experience and transfer those into great materials to improve your life in the present. Furthermore, all the lessons from the past function as the motivation for you to become better, respect and appreciate all you have in the present. For instance, having a thorough grasp of wars and how our ancestors have endeavoured to maintain or regain independence will raise our respect for what we are inherited nowadays and motivation to develop the country besides maintaining the precious peace.
In conclusion, the past is the meaningful period that we have passed and all the lessons we gain from it are valuable in various ways.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, really, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, as well as, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79464285714 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61079428742 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8644130782 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.071428571 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249756414263 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915253358297 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602788870122 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135009998976 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804480596042 0.056905535591 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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