Learning to manage money is one of the key aspects of adult life. How in your view can individuals best learn to manage their money?
In the modern life, people, especially young people, usually face with a lot of stress from their works or families so they go shopping as a solution to reduce the stress. It leads to the high level of indebtedness of young people. Therefore, learning financial management method is an important ability of people these days. In my opinion, young people can acquire a knowledge of money management via their parents and practice in their daily life.
First of all, people can gain an understanding of financial management through their parents. This is because parents know clearly their weaknesses and the best approach for them to learn the method. A good example of this is the Hebrew is well-known in the procedure of teaching their children how to differentiate money when they were 3 years old. At the age of 8, the children have to earn money by themselves via helping their parents’ housework.
Besides, young people can also learn the way to manage their finances via trial and error method. Managing finance is one of the most concern of people so there are many books, articles, suggestions of financial professors….and so on, which mentioned a lot of different strategies. Therefore, how can people find out the most appropriate solution without trial each of them to evaluate the most suitable application. For example, with the development of technologies, people can easily search an application for mobile phone to help them manage finances. However, there are various similar applications on their phone so the best way is trial each of them to evaluate the most appropriate application.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09433962264 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90081929478 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550943396226 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9740590214 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.846153846 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285069795423 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104536525107 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657411711394 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201544413545 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327702286563 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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