Leaving in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree

Essay topics:

Leaving in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

‘Learn a new language and get a new soul’, this adage hold a true meaning in life, as it is believed by few individuals that residing in a foreign land leads to many socio and real life challenges because of the language barrier; however, I disagree and assert that none of such issues affect to the extent that they cannot be resolved.

Beyond any qualm, there are myriad of social and practical concerns that people go through abroad, such as purchasing amenities, making new friends or getting a job. But these issues can be resolved by the everyday communication with the natives; in fact, it will not be incorrect to infer that a person learns a speech better at a foreign land than in his own country. Also, with the inception of the technological era, learning has become easier, with the help of advanced applications and online tutors, learning a native language is mere a challenge. To quote an instance, a longitudinal study in Canada on Indian masses stated that indeed they go through hurdle due to communication gap, but none of such obstacles have caused them serious problems. Hence, such social and practical problems are not too big to be solved.
Another pivotal factor in the aforementioned preposition is that English is a global language, widely accepted by all nations through with; it becomes even easier for the people to deal with any scenario. Additionally, countries welcoming the immigrants have provisions for a good lifestyle for them. Indian markets for examples are available in most of the countries, where people not only can purchase things of their daily use but also can do part-time jobs. Therefore, dealing in an outlandish language in an overseas country is not a huge deal.

In conclusion, although it is a widespread notion that people face many kinds of problems, but in my opinion, these are not big issues to be dealt with. Nonetheless, people ought to make good use of technology and must learn some of the basic words of that country. But in future will language create barriers or there will be only one universal language? Still stays a question.

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Average: 8.2 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 153, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'lead'?
Suggestion: lead
...viduals that residing in a foreign land leads to many socio and real life challenges ...
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Line 7, column 226, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...e good use of technology and must learn some of the basic words of that country. But in fut...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, nonetheless, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89944134078 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74575180238 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58938547486 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.6975722793 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.285714286 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150830479959 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474995560995 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417475460874 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800837361196 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336417075992 0.056905535591 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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