Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world.
What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions.
The accelerating rate of juvenile delinquencies has become a matter of concern in recent years. Although there are some inevitable driving forces of this worrying trend, measures can be taken to mitigate them.
To begin, the first and foremost culprit of law-breaking actions among teenagers is a lack of parental supervisor. As metropolitian parents are obsessed with the hustle and bustle of modern life, their children are not taught to distinguish right from wrong. Therefore, they tend to commit illegal activities such as vandalizism and alcohol abuse. For example, courts around the world have long experienced a history of cases when criminals are under 18 years old without fully awareness. A further element leading to this problem is that adolescents are suffered from peer pressure, catalysing their extraodinary willingness to try on new and fresh experience even if it leads to illegal actions.
However, there are several actions that governments and citizens could take into account to solve the aforementioned problem. First of all, parents should try to maintain their work and life balance. For instance, they can spend their weekends taking their kids to an entertain center. A second measure the governments can apply is through education. For example, schools should include legal subjects in the curriculum to equip their students with better awareness of some moral and cognitive concepts and therefore, they will avoid crimes and become good citizens. Finally, government should impose stricter punishments as a deterrent against juvenile delinquents.
In conclusion, although it can be observed that the lack of guidance as well as friend stress are the main cause for youth criminal, various measures can be taken to tackle with this pressing issues.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43525179856 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8168407649 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651079136691 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9883595579 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.928571429 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102026632939 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0274582195305 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357127981569 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0603357486514 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00936568205141 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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