Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world.
What are the reasons for this ? and suggest some solutions.
These days, an increasing number of people are concerned about an increase in the levels of youth crime in
many cities. This essay will discuss some reasons why this has occurred and suggest some ways overcome
this worrying trend.
No one can deny that there is a variety of determining factors which are responsible for the growth of teenage
crime. The first reason is connected with the family. In order for children to grow up in a balanced way, it is
very important that they are nurtured well by their parents. However, nowadays, it is often the case that children
are neglected. This may be because of the fact that many parents in cities now both have to work, so they are often
not around to give their children support when needed. Another factor is the increasing levels of poverty around
the world. We have seen with globalisation the rich get richer and the poor get poorer, and this inevitably means
that those who are poorer will have to resort to illegal means to get what others have. Of course, this will
include the children in the poorer families. For example, more than 50 percent of the family in African countries
earn less than one dollar a day and obviously this amount of money is not enough to maintain the living
standard for their children; therefore, they tend to commit a crime to survive. All in all, it is clear that there are a
couple of reasons leading to increasing young crime rate.
However, there are several actions that could be taken to eradicate the problems described above. Firstly, one of
the ways to combat the problem is to have stricter punishments. Although it can be outside factors that lead to
crime, it is still important to have severe punishments to deter teenagers from crime. All too often, because they
are young, the courts are too lenient. Parents also have to take more responsibility for their children’s actions.
They too should be punished if their children commit a crime. Therefore, reducing youth crime rate would
possibly be the result of these actions.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for youth crime increase in many large cities, and steps
need to be taken to tackle these issues. I hope that all governments in the world should collaborate on reducing
the gap between the rich and the poor, only by which can people live in a security world in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 28, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...at children are neglected. This may be because of the fact that many parents in cities now both have to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1994.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82808716707 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44926714186 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510895883777 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2725000675 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9523809524 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294748536798 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797401747118 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069899709753 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780965397122 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669114514765 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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