Life has become much more stressful compared to our parent’s generation. As a result, stress-related illnesses are increasing around the world. Why is stress such widespread in the modern world and what do you think can be done to overcome the problems caused by stress?
Nowadays, people are so wrapped up in personal and professional life, they do not stop to smell flowers. This type of rush life is leading to the mental illness to all over the world. The essay will examine the cause of stress of people in today’s world and its possible solution.
To begin with, people are racing against the clock to meet the expectation of the modern lifestyle. The major cause of the stressful life of modern society is unrealistic expectations and fear of uncertainty. People always want more in life and in this circle, they make their life more stressful. Moreover, unsatisfied job, low income, poor lifestyle is also a major cause of stress in people life. For instance, the recent research had revealed that people who work under big pressure and with unsupportive employer feel more stress than other. Similarly, personal stress also leads people to stressful life, such as divorce, fear of promotion, loss of job, chronic illness, getting married.
Moreover, goal economic crisis and inflation are also another cause of depression. As a result, people cannot meet the real expectation of modern life and get trapped in loans and debts.
On the other hand, as a solution to this type of stressful life, the government and person themselves need to make further effort. However, the concerned authorities must need to implement better retirement life facilities for their people, so the people will not think much about old age life. Moreover, creating more employment opportunities, a flexible work environment, the basic scale of every employee like, skilled and unskilled can play a vital role in diminishing stress level. Whereas, person own selves also most know the criteria of lifestyle, expenses, living cost. More expectation also leads the person in stress.
In conclusion, stress can be dangerous for people and this can ruin mental well-being as well. So, the individuals themselves also make some effort for being healthy and the government must also play a vital role to decrease this problem.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 520, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wn selves also most know the criteria of life style, expenses, living cost. More ...
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Line 9, column 220, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...t must also play vital role to decrease this problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19325153374 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6053203844 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567484662577 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8081148897 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0555555556 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270237672989 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963328360334 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513178938835 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149818102566 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516437534735 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 520, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wn selves also most know the criteria of life style, expenses, living cost. More ...
^^^
Line 9, column 220, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...t must also play vital role to decrease this problems.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19325153374 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6053203844 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567484662577 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8081148897 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0555555556 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270237672989 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963328360334 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513178938835 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149818102566 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516437534735 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.