Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, globalization has become a phenomenon, so there is an increasing number of people who study, work or live in a foreign country. Living abroad might require many conditions such as economy, education, and so on. From my perspective, language plays an important role in this situation because the lack of it could cause variety issues.
Firstly, living in a country without knowing any local word is a big obstacle for people who want to integrate to the local life. One of the main reason is that language is an indispensable element to create a productive conversation, which is common way of investigating the world. Therefore, lacking the ability to connect with everything around could make people become isolated. When a person travel far away from home, family, and friends, being isolated might lead to serious mental illness such as depression.
Secondly, in the present, seeking for a job is quite difficult even for local people, who have the advantage of being fluent in sharing their thoughts. So it is impossible for foreingner, who could not make a basic conversation join the employee market. And it will cause potential risk for their economic condition.
Nevertheless, there are some arguments said that the current technology provide human with the translating applications, which have been developed day by day to satisfy human's need. However, relying on these apps is a risky method because they can have glitch anytime, and there is no way to predict when it will happen. Besides, in case of emergencies like disaster, robbery, waiting for translation might be too late and put people into dangerous situations.
Inconclusion, living abroad is not an easy option, which require immigrants to try their best to quickly adapt. Some people choose to make the most of technical devices and translating apps to deal with this linguistic problem, but I believe that learning the local language is the sustainable way to not only integrate but also become successful.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16307692308 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86237539456 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8979810127 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.866666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153061688898 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462536813173 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0232588174117 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799214216936 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156135413986 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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