Living in country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as
well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Speaking the foreign tongue of the country where one moves to always have its perks but but mostly
is disadvantages. I completely agree with this statement and in this essay I will talk about the social
as well as practical issues.
Moving to an international land where one has to learn the local language is always a task. The first
and foremost difficulty is to socialise with the regional people. No matter how much you master the
tongue, for some reason most of them always end up in a club filled with own kind. In few of these
cases people mostly throw a welcome party or a dinner to invite and know their neighbours or
acquaintances well. But there is always a feeling of being aloof from others. This is due the
unfamiliarity of their culture and in few cases such as sacred Hindu temples, foreigners are forbidden
no matter how well they know the language.
There are a number of practical issues as well, like public transport where you have to learn the
colloquial terms to get the ticket faster. As per research most of the people living away from their
mother land face issues with their household chores due to language barrier on a day to day basis.
The main issues is during emergencies where one has to fill the forms or talk to the doctors
describing their concerns and problems.
Therefore one can conclude that speaking in a foreign language mostly has its downhill. The solution
for this could be learning the language with its slang and educating the rural people to accept
foreigners with open arms.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: but
...here one moves to always have its perks but but mostly is disadvantages. I completely ...
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Line 12, column 44, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...loquial terms to get the ticket faster. As per research most of the people living ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...escribing their concerns and problems. Therefore one can conclude that speaking in a for...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, therefore, well, as to, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75925925926 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48603507022 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551851851852 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3543179035 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8461538462 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262718996125 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889417071282 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664683667516 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789257833378 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061283886944 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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