living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Today we are living in a world that many people because of poor living condition and globalization tend to settle in another part of the world. Since, they have to learn a new language for communication. It asserted by some people that speaking to a new language can bring detrimental different problems. Although there are a number of drawbacks associated with this topic, I personally think that its benefits are by no means negligible.
To begin with, several drawbacks can be mentioned that are involved in this issue. Firstly, different pronunciation from natives and inappropriate word choosing are commonplace problems between beginner speakers , and this could lead to misunderstanding in conversations. As a result, this might have negative effects on their relationship with their colleagues and friends and make them feel alone . Consequently, mental problems such as stress, anxiety and depression are associated with this problem.
On the other hand, speaking a foreign language also means a new opportunity. To elaborate more, many individuals choose to live or study abroad ,and that requires to be able to speak fluent in the other language .Hence, they must have the ability to socialize with others without struggle , and if it is not the case , they will probably face more concerning problems . Respectively, in this case , speaking a foreign language is not only a disadvantage but also a great chance to deal with problems.
In conclusion, due to globalization, many people decide to live or study oversea , however I assume that speaking a foreign language can bring various negative impacts , I do believe that its beneficial impacts are by no means negligible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27881040892 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09267677118 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579925650558 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4498035278 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.333333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278648384892 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997588593923 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398823585306 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157733751543 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374589130488 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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