Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Immigration to a more developed country is considered a remarkable trend currently. In order to adjust to a new environment, immigrants have to cope with various problems, particularly language barriers. Therefore, it is said that numerous serious social and practical problems can arise when people have to speak a different language when living abroad. However, I do not agree with the statement since I believe that those problems are not as serious as we thought.
On the one hand, people who are forced to use a foreign language when they are living overseas are prone to several problems. Firstly, for those who have a low ability to perform the language, they will have to face many difficulties in their daily lives and work or study as well. In fact, if a student is poor in their foreign language, they cannot understand thoroughly the lessons, assignments, further discussions, or even communication among their peers. Consequently, their school performances are detrimentally affected. Secondly, due to their language barriers, they cannot integrate into their new society, which results in several mental issues. Stress, disappointment and lack of confidence are problems that they are subject to. As a result, people who are not good at a foreign language may suffer from some social and practical problems when living in a new environment.
On the other hand, the problems mentioned are believed to be less tremendous in some cases. In terms of people with good language acquisition, they do not consider it a problem. Only when they perform the language well can they understand daily “slangs” or jokes from local people. Moreover, they are also believed to adapt quickly and be successful in many aspects of life. Additionally, for countries which use English or French as their main language, newcomers will find it extremely useful when being able to use them since they will have numerous opportunities to work in multicultural companies worldwide.
In conclusion, a foreign language may seem to cause several issues to citizens; however, those problems are not very tremendous and can be mitigated. Learners who are going to live in a country in which a totally different language should invest more in their language study progress in order to catch up with the native citizens there.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.208 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97414518065 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506666666667 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4188404449 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227124664753 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744911447612 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621794890695 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15916738538 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816753295866 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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