Longer life spans and improvements in the health of older people suggest that people over the age of sixty-five can continue to live full and active lives.
In what ways can society benefit from the contribution that older people can make?
With the tremendous advancement of health care, older people are believed to have a more active live than in the past. In my opinion, older generation can make contribution to their society, and I will outline two common areas that they can participate in.
The first area is to involve in special family’s occasions. Since the elderly are experienced in traditions that are passed by through generations, family members can absorb more knowledge about the recipes of traditional meals, traditional games, for example. Therefore, traditions will be preserved and the members will feel their lives are more complete. On the other hand, children can understand more about their country’s history through stories told by grandparents. In fact, gathering whole family members together increases happiness.
Another area is senior citizens can participate in work, regardless of part-time or full-time. A number of professions such as: teaching, research, mentoring, and writing require experienced people, hence, older people can contribute in these jobs. In addition, because grown-up people nowadays have been forced to work overtime, they do not have much time to take care of their children. Thanks to their healthy parents, they will not worry about who should look after their kids. Once grandparents take great care of their grandchildren, family strength can be tied.
In conclusion, it is true that quality health care and medical services have raised life’s expectancy. I firmly believe that older people still can make great contribution to societies by reportedly preserving country’s culture, taking care of children, even taking part in important professions.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, look, so, still, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54085603113 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89113175517 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626459143969 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7792088882 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.714285714 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266057596037 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879757812988 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079018864814 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18645349157 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912037518899 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.