A lot of money is spent on the fashion and hair care. Some people it is a wastage of money, however other feel it important in the present time. Discuss views and give your own opinion.
Teenagers and adult people lots of money spent to buy clothes and treat facials and hair treatments, while want to use future supplements to money. These two typical these two typical supliment want to correctly balanced.
Initially, the first thing it is commonly believed that, all people prefer to live happy camper life without any doubts. At the present, most of fashions are updating in the world. Furthermore adolescents want to suit these types of fashionable things whereas some parents this chance deprive to their children because damone parents always tell one day you will face various struggles, therefore you definitely want to save your money to solve your future problems. Moreover, save currency and after your all future plans want to supply money. As a result, you can live delirious life in the future.
In addition, year by year apparently grow up all human beings. All teenagers can't back to see past life therefore admittedly, all fashions should suit their life and definitely want to think back how to approach to the future targets and a large proportion money don't waste every time to do the fashions. Small baby is born and they have to face different steps for whole life style. Consequently, want stick to education life.
In conclusion, all people might to do fashionable things their adolescent step and after remind how to move different goals and want save money for future life and after forecast step can deter every matters for their lifestyle. Thus, one day you will live better person in the world and younger generation gives advices for your without blank life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the fashions') or simply say ''most fashions''.
Suggestion: most of the fashions; most fashions
...ife without any doubts. At the present, most of fashions are updating in the world. Furthermore ...
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Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
... of fashions are updating in the world. Furthermore adolescents want to suit these types of...
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Line 3, column 482, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lve your future problems. Moreover, save currency and after your all future plans...
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Line 6, column 79, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...row up all human beings. All teenagers cant back to see past life therefore admitte...
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Line 6, column 265, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...re targets and a large proportion money dont waste every time to do the fashions. Sm...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...k to education life. In conclusion, all people might to do fashionable thing...
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Line 8, column 332, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ounger generation gives advices for your without blank life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02611940299 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44858866156 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578358208955 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.1507400249 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.615384615 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162764764469 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574546919933 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630480001183 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106165590337 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412043918444 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.