A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly.
Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world.
Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?
Tourism has a great impact on the economic, social and cultural aspects of a country and people have different views whether it will be more beneficial rather than just a burden. While some are convinced that it is a key source of income, others presume that it might be a cause of trouble if not carefully controlled. In my point of view, tourism plays an enormous role and the merits are greater than the demerits.
Opening doors for the tourists welcome foreign exchange; visitor spending brings back business revenue, intellectual and technological influences and consequently increasing the overall economy. Tourism brings the idea to give importance to the preservation of the historical artifacts and infrastructure thereby diversifying livelihood, job openings and attracting potential investors. For example, when Saudi Arabia opened its tourism, it attracted foreign investors such as the Chinese and European big-time business owners. Positive influences also opened its door to women empowerment such as the ability to drive, make decisions for themselves and the right to have an education - basically starting to have the same rights as the men.
Together with the advancement comes the threat to the cultural and traditional aspects of the country. Cross-cultural connections open unwanted abrupt lifestyle changes that are detrimental to the host country such as negative changes in values and customs. Religious importance is diminished as can be seen from the younger generation since they mimic foreign cultures. What is happening now in Saudi Arabia is a very good example. The country has preserved for so long it’s traditional, cultural and religious conservative beliefs such as the wearing of black abaya that comes with the cloak to cover the hair and the face exposing only the eyes, prohibited public display of affection, mingling with the opposite sex and strict observance with prayer times wherein everyone, if not obliged to stop, they need to pray as well.
In conclusion, when it comes to advancements either economical or survival, the benefits of tourism is greater than the negative effect it brings, given that they should know how to set certain rules to preserve the upbringing of the citizens and the country and oblige the tourist to respect and obey the rules.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32152588556 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86939537541 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602179836512 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.9161562385 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.230769231 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2307692308 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106323207578 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381765878533 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354312564287 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0664831219676 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478050910515 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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