As major cities around the world are growing fast and many problems occur. What are the problems that young people live in cities are caused by continued growth? What solutions do you suggest?
Continued growth in metropolitan areas has been highlighted as an emerging issue, capturing significant public attention due to its implications on individuals of young generations. Identifying the problems behind this pattern could be the key to finding solutions.
It is true that major cities’ growth could be fraught with many pitfalls on young people. First, since major cities are invariably associated with industrialization process for better economic development, the proliferation of industrial parks with manufacturing factories is an inevitable product. This would feed into the increased concentration of exhausted fumes with micro particles, which could penetrate into human lung, making young individuals more susceptible to airborne diseases such as tuberculosis, bronchitis and even lung cancer. Second, due to major cities’s infrastructure betterment, making young individuals migrate from different less-developed regions for employment opportunities, the job competitiveness would ensue. Consequently, young individuals without proper education and qualifications would be dismissed, thereby resorting to social evils such as pickpocketing and drug selling to make ends meet.
However, official authorities could take steps to address these issues. First, in order to reduce the micro particles from industrial factories inhaled daily by citizens of young generations, official authorities should legislate the imposition of carbon tax. By setting specific taxation levels based on each amount of carbon emitted, factories would think twice before releasing carelessly due to the financial burdens they incur, thereby reversing the environmental deterioration. In addition, if governments could channel the foreign investments and public budget into rural areas, employment opportunities could be generated, preventing job migration to urban ares and guaranteeing stable employment for local citizens. For example, Vietnamese countryside regions have received significant monetary injections from many international corporations thanks to government policies, leading to the booming of service and business sectors, reducing unemployment rates considerably in these regions.
In conclusion, urban continued growth could cause environmental and occupational issues for young people. But these problems could be solved by better governmental policies.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, second, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2068.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 6.40247678019 5.12529762239 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36267094805 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653250773994 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0505889252 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.714285714 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132640690079 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524881458355 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518621381851 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924194125036 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461640402634 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.75 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 20.14 12.4159519038 162% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.18 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 78.4519038076 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.