Cities have everything people need. Thus, not only are cities large settlements, they also play an important role in progressing every sphere of public life by having everyone working there. However, due to the fact that major cities develop rapidly, there are many new issues that make the life of the youth harder. In this regard, it causes overcrowding which can be resolved by constructing more facilities outside cities.
Generally, many young people struggle with finding a workplace. Nowadays, many people can compete for the same workplace since there are no other appropriate workplaces for them. For instance, IT occupations may have over twenty people that applied to it. Furthermore, the abundance of transport puts a strain on their health. Cities oftenly problems with traffic on the roads which are the main causes of harmful exhaust emissions. Therefore, modern young people might have serious lung and heart illnesses and have difficulties with earning a living.
These problems can be solved by encouraging the government to construct more facilities and creating new workplaces. Regarding the first, by building a better road infrastructure, it is possible to decrease the number of traffic jams. For example, highways would allow transport to travel without any hindrance. Another solution is creating new workplaces in rural areas. There are many people that travel to cities in order to find a job. Hence, giving a workplace closer to their home would solve the lack of workplaces.
In conclusion, the measures that can be taken to tackle the lack of workplaces and unhealthy environment is building more facilities in rural and urban areas. In this manner, I consider new workplaces outside cities and improved infrastructure the best solutions. Cities are not the only places where people can live.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32413793103 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78786226004 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575862068966 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8834928151 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2631578947 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2631578947 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47368421053 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230501575391 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685661387372 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478154581457 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133854772928 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276232935398 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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