Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.
Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
The debate on whether to immunize children or not has long been undetermined by the law. Basically, Immunization aims to prevent and maximally protect the majority from various diseases and it should not be seen as a factor causing further harm to individuals. Furthermore, vaccination somewhat influences the longevity of the lives of the people.
The reduction of acquiring communicable diseases has greatly improved over the years through the provision preventive vaccination by healthcare organizations. To exemplify, Polio virus which is widely known at causing leg paralysis has now become a rarely occurring disease with the help of Oral Polio Vaccine.
Globally, the World Health Organization continues to update the vaccines needed by children. Likewise, modern research shows the development of various vaccines such as flu of different strains and other newly occurring diseases.
Nowadays, immunization can be claimed as a necessity in human survival. Without it, diseases will spread rapidly and will further cause either an increase in mortality rate or huge expenditure for treatment. The question on whether to make Immunization a law can be answerable by a yes, provided that the local government and all health establishments will provide support especially to the parents of underprivileged community.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, likewise, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 200.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19717062416 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3684572641 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.2 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175901634625 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604773491471 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433535268439 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919595542361 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447488185328 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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