Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines Should parents be made by law to immunize their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children

With advent of vaccines many diseases are made curable. Now the question arises. Wheather, it is to be made stringent by law to vaccinate the children or left to the choice of the parents to decide. In this essay, I will discuss pros and cons of the mandatory vaccination and explain the need of complusion by law.

To begin with, the government formalize many plans every year to decrease the death rate of infants and design programme to vaccinate the children free of cost. It includes pulse polio drops, vaccination of small pox etc. The results are evident from the recent study that India is declared polio free last year. Secondly, due to illiteracy in rural areas not everyone is aware of the benefit of vaccination. So, complusory medication expands our reach to down trodden community.

On the flip side, every year many cases come forward where side effects of vaccination has caused serious damage to the health of children, such as disfigurement, eyesight damage and hearing loss. Some children are allergic to various components of vaccines. So, without proper study they cannot be given to everyone in general. Hence, parents should be given a right to decide best fpr their children.

Finally, after analysing advantages and disadvantages, it can be concluded that vaccination should be made mandatory but still parents should be given the right to veto the decision if it harms the health of their children. Through this we can triumph over the various diseases and secure the healthy future of our young ones

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, in general, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62458143984 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61328125 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.9726973701 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373542885161 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105982293755 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111402135842 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222616714907 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11103135141 0.056905535591 195% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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