Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.
Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
The debate on whether to immunize children or not has long been undetermined by the law. Basically, Immunization aims to prevent and maximally protect the majority from various diseases and it should not be seen as a factor of causing further harm to individuals. Furthermore, vaccination somewhat influences the longevity of the lives of the people.
The reduction of acquiring various communicable diseases has greatly improved over the years through the provision preventive vaccination by the Health Industry. People are commonly considered healthy because of compliance to vaccination schedule. In fact, the Centers for Disease Control from around the world contributed to making the immunization schedule for children. To exemplify, Polio virus which is widely known at causing leg paralysis has now become a rarely occurring disease with the help of Oral Polio Vaccine. Another example is that Tetanus vaccination proved an almost zero occurrence on children.
Globally, the World Health Organization continues to update the vaccines needed by children. Likewise, modern research shows the development of various vaccines such as flu of different strains and other newly occurring diseases.
Nowadays, immunization can be claimed as a necessity in human survival. Without it, diseases will spread rapidly and will further cause either an increase in mortality rate or huge expenditures for treatment. The question on whether to make Immunization a law can be answerable by a yes, provided that the local government and all health establishments will provide support especially to the parents of underprivileged community.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, likewise, so, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67479674797 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11600678987 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638211382114 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.445370389 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.384615385 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180876844783 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576357078985 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039413968827 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100148903253 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459875570472 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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