In many cities there is little control on the design and construction of new homes and office buildings, and people can build houses in their own style. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a situation?
Recently, the issue that citizens can freedom design their houses and office buildings due to lack of law about housing has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Although this trend may cause some problems, its advantages can easily outweigh disadvantages.
There are some drawbacks of letting people construct building in their own style. First, without certain regalution on housing and building, architects will design their building without considering area surrounding, which may lead to an eyesore when someone look at the whole area. For example, it will be unsuitable if towering skyscrapers are constructed next to famous landmarks because skyscrapers will easily overshadowing landmarks. Another adverse circumstance is some cities appealing visitors due to the unique houses style there so if some owners change their houses, the amount of tourists may reduce. For example, Hoi An is famous for its consistency of antique houses so let people freedom vary their houses, it will influence both culture and economy there.
Although some aforementioned disadvantages, the advantages of this trend will be far more significant. In terms of economy, uncontrolled construction of housing and offices encourages investment in a city. In fact, investors may hesitate when they want to spend money on companies whose areas have myriad law about designing to follow. In terms of visual, no one can deny the beautiful of areas which are blending cultures. For example, District 1 of Ho Chi Minh City is considered as the most exquisite one in this city due to the combine of Europe and Asia style houses and buildings.
In conclusion, while unplanned growth of cities may create some difficulties for society, the benefits of this trend will be more huge.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'looks'.
Suggestion: looks
...ich may lead to an eyesore when someone look at the whole area. For example, it will...
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Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'overshadow'
Suggestion: overshadow
...ndmarks because skyscrapers will easily overshadowing landmarks. Another adverse circumstance...
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Line 5, column 337, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e myriad law about designing to follow. In terms of visual, no one can deny the be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32740213523 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87976666861 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601423487544 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0558510181 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.153846154 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242107349299 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935150606062 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845213521501 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140006363154 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072664632056 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.