In many countries, children are engaged on some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experiences important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this?
children going for a paid work totally depends on the one's family situation and also their interest. In some countries, children are allowed to do some paid work where, few people treat it as completely wrong. also there some others who consider this as good work experience. In my opinion, it has both merits and demerits like a coin has both sides. According to my perception, the arguments behind this are explained briefly in the following passage.
On the one hand, there are families who are backward regarding their financial situation. Therefore, they prefer to send their kids for work to earn money to reach their family necessities. also, in some families who don't have father are left with no option rather than sending their child to work and take the family responsibility to get survive. At the same time, people going for work at early age makes them to understand responsibilities and experience in different fields. For example, if a person father is a blacksmith and it is their family business. consequently, their son can also learn that creativity and continue their business from early age Indirectly, this helps them to develop their fame regarding their business.
On the other hand, pupil who are interested to get educated and be in good position should not be forced to go for work. education is never waste of money and time. For example, if one completed his Engineering course he can get a good software job. The highly educated person will definitely be in a better profession in their future.
After having considered all the points that I have discussed above, we can finally draw a conclusion that children must be educated and also encouraged to go for payed works. both have its own advantages. But one should not spoil their life by going in to negative fields.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, consequently, finally, if, regarding, so, therefore, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87296416938 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67963966949 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560260586319 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.246923289 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1111111111 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0555555556 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253093895988 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815276297574 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899815216904 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152916733966 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122156126023 0.056905535591 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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