Nowadays, showing brutal images and videos on TV shows and also in computer games has become a common theme in many countries. Certain demographic of society believes that showing these kinds of images is considered the main cause of increasing crime actions. This essay will argue that increasing crime is not as a result of what just said before, exactly contrary to these people’s beliefs.
Finding the root causes of rising crime has always been a major concern for governments in every country. Showing rough and wild behaviour in many films has reinforced this hypothesis, which insists on tending children, who are very interested in violent computer games and films to unethical and harsh behaviour. There is some evidence which illustrates around 30 per cent of American schoolchildren who have behaved violently at school have been influenced by violent films and have been modelled on them. So, this little example has created the wrong mentality.
Despite the minor effect of illustrating cruel pictures and videos on rising social crime, many sociologists believe that the main cause of tending to crime all around the world is poverty and matters related to penury. Meet the basic needs of every human is the most important force to lead people who are below the poverty line to crime. According to Maslow's Hierarchy of Needs, everyone should access to basic needs, and in case of absolute poverty, people tend to crime to access the lowest wealth for themselves and families. Overall, it can be concluded that the main cause of the increase in crime is poverty.
This essay discussed that increasing crime is not as a result of showing violent images in television and video games. In my opinion, the idea of increasing crime due to broadcasting savage images is completely rejected.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07407407407 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59962315784 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569023569024 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.032656544 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.923076923 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268894696466 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941011284407 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614610367367 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17054891307 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560793310332 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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